homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~^^
Did you have a good weekend?
I took lots of rest. I went to sauna(Jim Jil Bang in Korea) with my friend.
I stayed there for 11 hours hehe It was fun.
My friend really spend lots of money for her puppies..
Cutting their hair, food and hospital payment...
She said that it is hard to support them but they are already a part of our life so
she has a resposbility in them...She is happy with puppies that is the most important
thing for her..so I totally understand her...
Let's see in the class!!!^^
1. The kind man paid for my ticket.
2. I cannot s[이름]p because my neighborhood is very noisy.
3. After John washed his car, it looked very clean.
4. Turtles and snails do not move quickly. They are both slow animals.
5. The large shirt is too big.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
Yes I did have a fantastic weekend.^^ I slept a lot too. ^^ I\'m glad to hear that you are feeling better. ^^ I heard sauna is very good for the skin. What other things do you also do to take care of your skin? I\'d love to hear some tips.^^
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Anne
Hi~^^Did you have a good weekend?
>> Correct!I took lots of rest. I went to sauna(Jim Jil Bang in Korea) with my friend.>> Correct!I stayed there for 11 hours hehe It was fun.>> I stayed there dor 11 hours. Hehe! It was fun (Punctuation)
My friend really spend lots of money for her puppies..
>> My friend really spends lots of money for her puppies..
Cutting their hair, food and hospital payment...
[She spends money] for their grooming, food, and hospital bills.She said that it is hard to support them but they are already a part of our life so
>> She said that it is hard to support them but they are already a part of our lives so
she has a resposbility in them...She is happy with puppies that is the most important thing for her..>> she is responsible for them... She is happy with the puppies, and that is the most important thing for her.
so I totally understand her...
>> Correct!Let\'s see in the class!!!^^>> See you later in class!!!^^
1. The kind man paid for my ticket.
>> Correct!2. I cannot s[이름]p because my neighborhood is very noisy.
>> Correct!3. After John washed his car, it looked very clean.
>> Correct!4. Turtles and snails do not move quickly. They are both slow animals.
>> Correct!5. The large shirt is too big.
>> Correct!
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