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2015-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello! I am writting to September 4th. Hahahah. Have a nice day! When I was 16 years old, I tested very important to me to enter good high school. At that time, my grade was too low to enter to there. However fortuately I passed the entrance exam.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I wonder where you are. Are you in the library? I hope you\'re having a good time. Take care! T. JanE ^^ Hello!>> Correct I am writting to September 4th. Hahahah.>> I\'m writing my homework for September 4th.  Have a nice day!>> Correct When I was 16 years old, I tested very important to me to enter good high school.>> When I was 6 years old, I took a very impotant test for me to enter a good high school.  At that time, my grade was too low to enter to there.>> At that time, my grade was too low to be admitted.  However fortuately I passed the entrance exam. >> Fortunately, I passed the entrance exam. 

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