homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to talk with people without awkwarding.
I am little interested in surrounding. I didn't know interests well that people know.
sometimes I awkward because I didn't tell them something.
So I often am sad.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! You can do something about that. Be confident when speaking and be sure that you are really familiar with what you\'re saying so you won\'t feel awkward. You can do it! Take care and have a good day!
T. JanE ^^
I want to talk with people without awkwarding.>> I want to talk with people without fee[이름]g awkward.
I am little interested in surrounding.
>> I\'m a little bit interested in my surroundings.
I didn\'t know interests well that people know.>> I didn\'t know what people re interested in.
sometimes I awkward because I didn\'t tell them something.>> Sometimes I felt awkward because I couldn\'t say anything.
So I often am sad.
>> So I am often sad.
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