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2015-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I think people should strive to do anything to improve their ability. I think there is no development for people who satisfy their ability. If we don't satisfy our ability, we try to improve our ability. Satisfaction is different with self-confidence. We should have self-confidence but we shouldn't satisfy our state. Then we can strive to do anything related with our own skill.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

I really like what you wrote, Adam!

Oops, I want to share this to you:

\"There\'s a thin line between complacency and satisfaction.\"

Let me know your feelings about that statement^^

I think people should strive to do anything to improve their ability.

>>CORRECT!

 I think there is no development for people who satisfy their ability.

>>CORRECT!

If we don\'t satisfy our ability, we try to improve our ability.

>>If we don\'t do it, we must try to improve it.

Satisfaction is different with self-confidence.

>>Satisfaction is different from self-confidence.

We should have self-confidence but we shouldn\'t satisfy our state.

>>We should have self-confidence but we shouldn\'t get satisfied with our state.

Then we can strive to do anything related with our own skill.

>>CORRECT!

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