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2015-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello! Somebody told me that Tuesday is a breath-taking day~~*^^* How have you been doing?^^ I am also glad that you slept alot. As you said, Proper sauna is food for our health...but saddly I don't really care about my skin..hehe I am too tired of studying and working..how can I care about my skie..hehe I know that I need do care it as I am getting older..Actually, my mom really has a good skin and she always told me that caring skin is important for women..She gave me some advice..First, s[이름]p early between 10pm~2am. Second drink 2 liters of water in a day Third clean your make up even you are very tired. Forth Put on some lotions after washing..hehe My mom has a machine for her skin, Sometimes she does for me but it is so tiresome. Isn't it?*^^* 1) Monica ate ggs. 2) Teddy and Monica ate eggs. 3) Mickie studied English every day. 4) Arthur and Jason studied English on Monday and Tuesday. 5) Angie and I drank coffee.

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Hi Miss [이름]! Indeed it\'s a breath-taking Tuesday! Caring for the skin is often too bothersome. ^^ I agree with you. ^^ As for me, I try to wash my face at night, but sometimes I get so s[이름]py that I don\'t do it at all. ^^ See you later in class! Teacher Anne   Hello! Somebody told me that Tuesday is a breath-taking day~~*^^*>> Correct!How have you been doing?^^ >> Correct! I am also glad that you slept alot. >> I am also glad that you slept a lot.As you said, Proper sauna is food for our health...but saddly I don\'t really care about my skin..hehe >> As you said, proper sauna is food (or good) for our health... but sadly, I don\'t really care about my skin.. hehe I am too tired of studying and working..how can I care about my skie..hehe >> I am too tired of studying and working, how can I care for my skin? hehe  I know that I need do care it as I am getting older.. >> I know  I know I need to take care of it as I am getting older.. Actually, my mom really has a good skin and she always told me that caring skin is important for women.. >> Actually, my mom has a really good skin and she always told me that caring for the skin is important for women.. She gave me some advice..First, s[이름]p early between 10pm~2am. >> She gave me some advice: First, s[이름]p early between 10pm~2am. Second drink 2 liters of water in a day >> Correct!  Third clean your make up even you are very tired. >> Third, wipe off your make up even when you are very tired. Forth Put on some lotions after washing..hehe >> Fourth, put some lotion after bathing/taking a shower.. hehe My mom has a machine for her skin, >> Correct! Sometimes she does for me but it is so tiresome. Isn\'t it?*^^* >> Sometimes, she uses the machine on me but it is so tiresome. Isn\'t it? *^^*1) Monica ate ggs. >> Monica ate eggs (spelling ^^)2) Teddy and Monica ate eggs. >> Correct!3) Mickie studied English every day. >> Correct!4) Arthur and Jason studied English on Monday and Tuesday. >> Correct!5) Angie and I drank coffee. >> Correct!

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