Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
30.....pepole will live with out water and food.
50.....Pepole is no die
80.... Robot will work everything.
110......The earlth die.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Good day.
Thank you for sharing your ideas. OMG. I am afraid already. hehe..
I might die eralier. hehe. Just kidding. :)
To avoid death of people, they should take good care of mother nature.
How, by planting trees and by not polluting the sources.
Let us help and promote the clean and green program.
Thank you so much [이름] and have a great day ahead.
~~ Teacher Kris
30.....pepole will live with out water and food.
>> In 2030, people will live without water and without food.50.....Pepole is no die
>> In 2050, people will die.80.... Robot will work everything.
>> In 2080, robots will do the work.
OR:
>> In 2080, robots will work everything. 110......The earlth die.
>> In 2110, the earth will die.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.