homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to be able to have much time myself.
When they are together, they are contricted and won't be free.
If I do alone, I will do freely and can make use of my time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for yur composition! Sometimes, it feels good to be alone. It\'s a good time to reflect. However, I love interacting with people, so most of the time I don\'t like to be alone. Take care and have a great day!
T. JanE ^^
I like to be able to have much time myself.>> I like being able to have much time for myself.
When they are together, they are contricted and won\'t be free.>> When I\'m with others, I feel constricted and unfree.
If I do alone, I will do freely and can make use of my time. >> If I am alone, I can freely use my time.
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