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2015-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Great morning!^^ How are you today? It is fall here every day, the weather is so nice.. That is why I did laundry again..^^ I don't normally have nightmare but like you said, I have bad dreams when I am very tired. It is not about ghosts..Bad things happens to my family.. After I woke up, I felt very bad.. 1. I am happy because I did well on my math test. 2. Paul and Marcus are brothers. They have the same mother. 3. The air is very cold, and there is a lot of ice on the road. 4. I always arrive to class twenty minutes early so that I have time to prepare. 5. The library is a good place to study because it is very quiet.

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Hello, Miss [이름]! Today, I woke up with a stiff neck and I remembered you. ^^ But now I am feeling better. I drank some water with rock salt. ^^ Bad dreams are really scary. Thank God they are not real. ^^ I really enjoyed today\'s conversation and I\'m looking forward for tomorrow! ^^ See you! Teacher Anne Great morning!^^ How are you today? >> Correct!It is fall here every day, the weather is so nice.. >> It is already the autumn season here, the weather is so nice..That is why I did laundry again..^^ >> That  is why I did the laundry again.. ^^I don\'t normally have nightmare but like you said, >> I don\'t normally have nightmares, but like you  said, I have bad dreams when I am very tired. It is not about ghosts.. >> Correct! Bad things happens to my family.. >> It\'s about bad things happening to my family..After I woke up, I felt very bad.. >> When I wake up, I feel very bad. >> After I wake up. I feel very bad.1. I am happy because I did well on my math test. >> Correct!2. Paul and Marcus are brothers. They have the same mother.>> Correct3. The air is very cold, and there is a lot of ice on the road. >> Correct!4. I always arrive to class twenty minutes early so that I have time to prepare. >> Correct!5. The library is a good place to study because it is very quiet. >> Correct!

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