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2015-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hi, Rose! Yesterday was company dinner. So, came home late ㅜㅜ Oversleep in the morning and did not exercise. ㅜㅜ This bad condition was in the morning classes not focus. Sorry, I will concentrate tomorrow. Let's start checking my homework. I love music. Depending hear and feel and all action is love. I always listen to music when I sad or happy. I Favorite music is 'Celine Dion - My heart will go on'. Titanic is an awesome movie. So, was fall in 'My heart will go on'. I want to recommend to Rose. Thank you for reading, Rose. See you tomorrow. Bye bye.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for writing this paragraph, Sir!

Music is indeed a wonderful creation.

It affects our feelings, it makes us happy or sad TT

See you!

Hi, Rose!

>>CORRECT!
 Yesterday was company dinner.

>>Yesterday was our company dinner.
 So, came home late ㅜㅜ

>>So, I came home late TT.
Oversleep in the morning and did not exercise. ㅜㅜ

>>I overslept in the morning and I did not exercise. TT
This bad condition was in the morning classes not focus.

>>That was the reason I did not focus on our morning class.
 Sorry, I will concentrate tomorrow.
>>CORRECT!
Let\'s start checking my homework.
>>CORRECT!
I love music.

>>CORRECT!
 Depending hear and feel and all action is love.

>>My feeling depends when I hear it, and I feel love.
 I always listen to music when I sad or happy.

>>I always listen to music when I am sad or happy.
 I Favorite music is \'Celine Dion - My heart will go on\'.

>>My favorite song is Celine Dion\'s  \"My Heart Will Go On\'.
 Titanic is an awesome movie.

>>CORRECT!
 So, was fall in \'My heart will go on\'.

>>So I fell in love with that song.
 I want to recommend to Rose.
>>
I want to recommend it to you.
Thank you for reading, Rose.

>>CORRECT!
 See you tomorrow.

>>CORRECT!
 Bye bye.

>>CORRECT!

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