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Thanks for writing this paragraph, Sir!
Music is indeed a wonderful creation.
It affects our feelings, it makes us happy or sad TT
See you!
Hi, Rose!
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Yesterday was company dinner.
>>Yesterday was our company dinner.
So, came home late ㅜㅜ
>>So, I came home late TT.
Oversleep in the morning and did not exercise. ㅜㅜ
>>I overslept in the morning and I did not exercise. TT
This bad condition was in the morning classes not focus.
>>That was the reason I did not focus on our morning class.
Sorry, I will concentrate tomorrow.
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Let\'s start checking my homework.
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I love music.
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Depending hear and feel and all action is love.
>>My feeling depends when I hear it, and I feel love.
I always listen to music when I sad or happy.
>>I always listen to music when I am sad or happy.
I Favorite music is \'Celine Dion - My heart will go on\'.
>>My favorite song is Celine Dion\'s \"My Heart Will Go On\'.
Titanic is an awesome movie.
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So, was fall in \'My heart will go on\'.
>>So I fell in love with that song.
I want to recommend to Rose.
>>I want to recommend it to you.
Thank you for reading, Rose.
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See you tomorrow.
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Bye bye.
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