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2015-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Below is the next part. The second misunderstanding, raised by Iris Young, is the assimilationist impulse behind liberalism. Liberalism's assumption that differences do not exist and do not have any special social meaning is the fairest way of accommodating all people. Besides, equal treatment is required by justice. Thus, it is not accurate explanation that liberals pursue the ideal of assimilation. For liberals, the right amount of diversity and the right amount of assimilation come about as a result of free choices within a framework of just institution. Lastly, there is the complaint that liberalism demands assimilation of those who migrate permanently to liberal democratic society. Barry believes that immigrants become assimilated to the national identity of the country is a proper objective of public policy in a liberal democratic state. However, it should be voluntary assimilation based on better life prospects of immigrants themselves.

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Hi Kaylee! I\'ve checked the second part of your composition. Please review it below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Below is the next part.>> CORRECT! The second misunderstanding, raised by Iris Young, is the assimilationist impulse behind liberalism. >> CORRECT! Liberalism\'s assumption, that differences do not exist and do not have any special social meaning, is the fairest way of accommodating all people. >> CORRECT! Besides, equal treatment is required by justice. >> CORRECT! Thus, it is not accurate explanation that liberals pursue the ideal of assimilation. >> Thus, it is not an accurate explanation that liberals pursue the idea of assimilation.For liberals, the right amount of diversity and the right amount of assimilation come about as a result of free choices within a framework of just institution. >> CORRECT! Lastly, there is the complaint that liberalism demands assimilation of those who migrate permanently to liberal democratic society. >> CORRECT! Barry believes that immigrants become assimilated to the national identity of the country is a proper objective of public policy in a liberal democratic state. >> CORRECT! However, it should be voluntary assimilation based on better life prospects of the immigrants themselves. >> CORRECT!

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