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2015-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~^^ It is a marvellous Wednesday..^^ I want to say "SOORY" first..I delay our class today.. Because of my nephew's hospital..^^; I am always very happy to talk to you because you make me really comforrable to talke in our class..That is how important for teacher's skill..^^ I am learning not only English also som skills from you..^^ I should be patient with my students more....^^; I know that I should try more to express my detailed ideas..I need to paractise speaking..but you are always encourage me to motivate using more expressions.. I will review my lessons today and be ready for tomorrow.. Always Thanks~~ Sincerely [이름]ie~~^^ 1) Eva likes chocolate. 2) Dustin watches movies. 3) Yoko plays the piano. 4) The students take tests. 5) It rains here a lot.

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Hi~^^ It is a marvellous Wednesday..^^ >> Hi! It is a marvelous Wednesday!I want to say \"SOORY\" first..I delay our class today.. >> First, I want to say \"Sorry\" because I delayed our class today.Because of my nephew\'s hospital..^^; >> Because I need to take my nephew to the hospital.I am always very happy to talk to you because you make me really comforrable >> I am always very happy to talk to you because you make me really comfortable to talke in our class..That is how important for teacher\'s skill..^^ >> to talk in our class.. That is an important skill for the teacher..^^Dearest Miss [이름]ie, Your letter cheered me up today. ^^ Thank you for writing. ^^ I am glad that you are learning from you.^^ I also want you to know that I am also very happy because you are my student and I truly enjoy our conversations. ^^ I hope your nephew will get better soon! Take care, Miss [이름]ie! Teacher Anne   PS: I have always wanted to call you [이름]ie. I really like your name. ^^   I am learning not only English also som skills from you..^^ >> I am not only learning English but also some skills from you..^^I should be patient with my students more....^^; >> I should be more patient with my students. ^^I know that I should try more to express my detailed ideas.. >> I know that I should try to express my ideas with more details. I need to paractise speaking.. >> Correct! but you are always encourage me to motivate using more expressions.. >> But you always encourage and motivate me to use more expressions..I will review my lessons today and be ready for tomorrow.. >> Correct!Always Thanks~~ >> I am always thankful. Sincerely[이름]ie~~^^ >> Correct!1) Eva likes chocolate. >> Correct!2) Dustin watches movies. >> Correct!3) Yoko plays the piano. >> Correct!4) The students take tests. >> Correct!5) It rains here a lot. >> Correct!

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