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Hi~^^ It is a marvellous Wednesday..^^
I want to say "SOORY" first..I delay our class today..
Because of my nephew's hospital..^^;
I am always very happy to talk to you because you make me really comforrable to talke
in our class..That is how important for teacher's skill..^^
I am learning not only English also som skills from you..^^
I should be patient with my students more....^^;
I know that I should try more to express my detailed ideas..I need to paractise speaking..but you are always encourage me to motivate using more expressions..
I will review my lessons today and be ready for tomorrow..
Always Thanks~~
Sincerely
[이름]ie~~^^
1) Eva likes chocolate.
2) Dustin watches movies.
3) Yoko plays the piano.
4) The students take tests.
5) It rains here a lot.
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Hi~^^ It is a marvellous Wednesday..^^
>> Hi! It is a marvelous Wednesday!I want to say \"SOORY\" first..I delay our class today..
>> First, I want to say \"Sorry\" because I delayed our class today.Because of my nephew\'s hospital..^^;
>> Because I need to take my nephew to the hospital.I am always very happy to talk to you because you make me really comforrable
>> I am always very happy to talk to you because you make me really comfortable
to talke in our class..That is how important for teacher\'s skill..^^
>> to talk in our class.. That is an important skill for the teacher..^^Dearest Miss [이름]ie,
Your letter cheered me up today. ^^ Thank you for writing. ^^ I am glad that you are learning from you.^^ I also want you to know
that I am also very happy because you are my student and I truly enjoy our conversations. ^^
I hope your nephew will get better soon!
Take care, Miss [이름]ie!
Teacher Anne
PS: I have always wanted to call you [이름]ie. I really like your name. ^^
I am learning not only English also som skills from you..^^
>> I am not only learning English but also some skills from you..^^I should be patient with my students more....^^;
>> I should be more patient with my students. ^^I know that I should try more to express my detailed ideas..
>> I know that I should try to express my ideas with more details.
I need to paractise speaking..
>> Correct!
but you are always encourage me to motivate using more expressions..
>> But you always encourage and motivate me to use more expressions..I will review my lessons today and be ready for tomorrow..
>> Correct!Always Thanks~~
>> I am always thankful.
Sincerely[이름]ie~~^^
>> Correct!1) Eva likes chocolate.
>> Correct!2) Dustin watches movies.
>> Correct!3) Yoko plays the piano.
>> Correct!4) The students take tests.
>> Correct!5) It rains here a lot.
>> Correct!
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