homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to get a good job and get good salary in five years.
I also prepare marriage so I should save enough money. There is no easy way to success. I desire to earn lots of money so I study hard. I have a self-confidence that I can do it anything to achieve my goal.
강사 첨삭
Nothing is impossible if we are determined to get what we want.
You just to act according to the circumstances and soar higher, Adam!!
I want to get a good job and get good salary in five years.
>>I want to get a good job and salary in five years.
I also prepare marriage so I should save enough money.
>>I am also preparing for marriage so I should save enough money.
There is no easy way to success.
>>CORRECT!
I desire to earn lots of money so I study hard.
>>CORRECT!
I have a self-confidence that I can do it anything to achieve my goal.
>> I have self-confidence that I can do anything to achieve my goal.
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