homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hello Jane!
for a long time I prepared the text book.
tomorrow I will make an effort to prepare it!
have a nice today!
I think my family's happiness is more important than money.
somebody like a lot of money. But it is not happy their life.
It is important that my mind is peace.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I appreciate your effort all the time, so don\'t worry about not being prepared with the textbook sometimes. Take care and have a good day!
T. JanE ^^
Hello, Jane!>> Correct
for a long time I prepared the text book.>> I didn\'t prepare the book for a long time.
Tomorrow I will make an effort to prepare it!>> Correct
have a nice today!>> Have a nice day! I think my family\'s happiness is more important than money.>> Correct
somebody like a lot of money. But it is not happy their life.>> Some people like to have a lot of money, but they aren\'t happy with their life.
It is important that my mind is peace. >> It is important to have peace of mind.
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