Homework

If I have a big bedroom. I am so happy. Because I see my freinds big bedroom I am suprise and happy. Please~~ I have a big bedrom.Beacause I like big bedroom.ㅠㅠ

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for doing your homework. I can feel your desire to have a big bedroom and I hope that it will come true:) Who knows, you might have a room bigger and nicer than your friends in the future. Anyways, here are the corrections I\'ve made so check on these and keep practicing your English skills such as grammar and vocabulary. You\'ve already made a good job so keep it up!^^   Don\'t just aim for a bigger room, aim for a bigger house when you\'re already capable^^:) (wink wink) Again, thank you and have a good night!:p   ~Teacher Kris     If I have a big bedroom. >> If I will have a big bedroom, I am so happy. >> I would be very happy. Because I see my freinds big bedroom I am suprise and happy. >> I was surprised when I saw my friends\' big bedrooms but I am happy for them. Please~~ I have a big bedrom.Beacause I like big bedroom.ㅠㅠ >> Please, I really like to have a big bedroom. TT TT