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I'm sorry for late submission^^; I agree with that businesses should do anything for making a profit basically, businessman want pursuit of profit to earn money because of this they work to have a big margin. My workplace also go for it. For one thing, when customer ask us for recommending any menu we recommend menu which make a profit a lot. Of course we consider their taste first but if they choose that menu owner will surely smile contentedly. So it sounds natural to business.

Hi [이름]! ^^   Good work in your composition! ^^ Your essay is absolutely A-1 that most of the corrections made were just to improve the eloquence of the essay overall. ^^ You know I was just kidding when I said you have fallen behind on your homework. ^^ That was just an example in our lesson.  ㅋㅋㅋ Good work all in all! ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I agree with that businesses should do anything for making a profit >> I agree that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. basically, businessman want pursuit of profit to earn money because of this they work to have a big margin. >> Basically, businessmen are always in pursuit in making money and because of this they work to have a big profit margin.   My workplace also go for it. >> My workplace is much the same way.   For one thing, when customer ask us for recommending any menu we recommend menu which make a profit a lot. >> For one thing, when a customer asks for a recommendation from the menu, we recommend the priciest where we can make a lot of income.   Of course we consider their taste first but if they choose that menu owner will surely smile contentedly. So it sounds natural to business. >> Of course, we consider the customer\'s tastes first but if they choose what we have recommended, the cafe owner will surely be content. Therefore, it is actually very natural for a business to do anything to make a profit.