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2015-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. Today, I have a class in the afternoon. This semester, I'm taking only two subjects although most students usually take three subjects. I will have to choose a topic for my doctoral dissertation soon. I want to think about it carefully during this semester. So, I decided to take two classes this semester. Instead of not taking three classes, I will read through books covering various fields. I hope that I could find a good topic for my doctoral dissertation. Wish me good luck! ^^ Below is my homework for today. 1. My grandfather is eighty-eight years old this year, but many people say that he seems to be as fit as a fiddle. 2. Last summer, the Park Geun-hye administration in Korea was sharply criticized by Korean people, because they didn't handle the outbreak of MERS virus. Then, many people thought Park Geun-hye administration was fiddling while Rome burns. 3. I recommend you to listen to some music when you feel down. It will jazz your life more up.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Your example sentences for the idioms were spot on! Wonderful job! Keep it up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Today, I have a class in the afternoon. >> CORRECT! This semester, I\'m taking only two subjects although most students usually take three subjects. >> CORRECT! I will have to choose a topic for my doctoral dissertation soon. >> CORRECT! I want to think about it carefully during this semester. >> CORRECT! So, I decided to take two classes this semester. >> CORRECT! Instead of not taking three classes, I will read through books covering various fields. >> Instead of taking three classes, I will just read through some books about various fields. I hope that I could find a good topic for my doctoral dissertation. >> CORRECT! Wish me good luck! ^^ >> CORRECT! Below is my homework for today.>> CORRECT! 1. My grandfather is eighty-eight years old this year, but many people say that he seems to be as fit as a fiddle. >> CORRECT! 2. Last summer, the Park Geun-hye administration in Korea was sharply criticized by Korean people, because they didn\'t handle the outbreak of MERS virus. >> CORRECT! Then, many people thought Park Geun-hye administration was fiddling while Rome burns. >> Back then, many people thought that the Park Geun-hye administration was fiddling while Rome burns. 3. I recommend you to listen to some music when you feel down. >> CORRECT! It will jazz your life more up. >> It will jazz up your life.  

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