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Hi~^^Anther nwe day for us~~*^^*
>> Hi, it\'s a new day for us.
It is so interesting when you see sunflowers, Cristmas is close..hehe
>> It is interesting that when you see sunflowers, it means Christmas is close. Hehe.
Because I see sunflowers during summer time..^^
>> Because I see sunflowers in summer.
Anyways..I heared that your city is not that hot unlike other cities in the philippines..^^
>> Anyway, I heard that your city is not that hot unlike other cities in the Philippines..^^
The weather in your city is really good. I want to go there if I have a chance.
>> Correct!
It is fall here in Korea..
>> Correct!
Like you said, every mountain is turing into colorful leaves which is really beautiful..
>> Just like you said, every tree in the mountain has colorful leaves which is really beautiful.
but..unfortunatly, I don\'t like go hiking..hehe
>> But, unfortunately, I don\'t like to go hiking. Hehe.
It is so tiring..hehe my mom liked to go to mountain so I followed onetime..
>> It is so tiring. My mom likes to go hiking so I went with her one time.
After that I hate hiking...hehehe
>> After that, I began to hate hiking.
Maybe I will just go on a picnic..hehe with yummy lunch box which I make..^^
>> Maybe I will just go on a picnic with a yummy lunchbox that I will make.^^
1. By the time I\'m 60, I will lose all my hair.
>> By the time I\'m 60, I will have lost all my hair.
2. I won\'t be able to talk to you in 15 minutes because I will do my
homework.
>> I won\'t be able to talk to you in 15 minutes because I will be doing my
homework.
3. By the time I get home, my wife will have eaten the whole cake.
>> Correct!
4. I will talk to my son about his poor test results.
>> Correct!
5. This time tomorrow I will swim in the ocean.
>> This time tomorrow I will swim in the ocean.
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