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2015-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~^^Anther nwe day for us~~*^^* It is so interesting when you see sunflowers, Cristmas is close..hehe Because I see sunflowers during summer time..^^ Anyways..I heared that your city is not that hot unlike other cities in the philippines..^^ The weather in your city is really good. I want to go there if I have a chance. It is fall here in Korea.. Like you said, every mountain is turing into colorful leaves which is really beautiful..but..unfortunatly, I don't like go hiking..hehe It is so tiring..hehe my mom liked to go to mountain so I followed onetime.. After that I hate hiking...hehehe Maybe I will just go on a picnic..hehe with yummy lunch box which I make..^^ 1. By the time I'm 60, I will lose all my hair. 2. I won't be able to talk to you in 15 minutes because I will do my homework. 3. By the time I get home, my wife will have eaten the whole cake. 4. I will talk to my son about his poor test results. 5. This time tomorrow I will swim in the ocean.

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Hi~^^Anther nwe day for us~~*^^*

>> Hi, it\'s a new day for us.
It is so interesting when you see sunflowers, Cristmas is close..hehe

>> It is interesting that when you see sunflowers, it means Christmas is close. Hehe.
Because I see sunflowers during summer time..^^

>> Because I see sunflowers in summer.

Anyways..I heared that your city is not that hot unlike other cities in the philippines..^^

>> Anyway, I heard that your city is not that hot unlike other cities in the Philippines..^^

The weather in your city is really good. I want to go there if I have a chance.

>> Correct!

It is fall here in Korea..

>> Correct!
Like you said, every mountain is turing into colorful leaves which is really beautiful..

>> Just like you said, every tree in the mountain has colorful leaves which is really beautiful.

but..unfortunatly, I don\'t like go hiking..hehe

>> But, unfortunately, I don\'t like to go hiking. Hehe.
It is so tiring..hehe my mom liked to go to mountain so I followed onetime..

>> It is so tiring. My mom likes to go hiking so I went with her one time.
After that I hate hiking...hehehe

>> After that, I began to hate hiking.
Maybe I will just go on a picnic..h
ehe with yummy lunch box which I make..^^

>> Maybe I will just go on a picnic with a yummy lunchbox that I will make.^^

1. By the time I\'m 60, I will lose all my hair.

>> By the time I\'m 60, I will have lost all my hair.
2. I won\'t be able to talk to you in 15 minutes because I will do my
homework.

>> I won\'t be able to talk to you in 15 minutes because I will  be doing my
homework.
3. By the time I get home, my wife will have eaten the whole cake.

>> Correct!
4. I will talk to my son about his poor test results.

>> Correct!
5. This time tomorrow I will swim in the ocean.

>> This time tomorrow I will swim in the ocean.

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