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2015-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Once I worked and I rest now because of some reason. I'm sorry that I receive money to parent. I stress because I must work and earn the salary. so I'm not happy. except for this reason, I don't have problems.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! DOn\'t worry; you can repay your parents by studying hard. Are you really studying hard? Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Once I worked and I rest now because of some reason.>> I worked once but I quit because of some reasons.  I\'m sorry that I receive money to parent.>> I feel sorry to my parents for getting money from them.  I stress because I must work and earn the salary. >> I am stressed because I must look for a job to have my own income.  So I\'m not happy.>> Correct except for this reason, I don\'t have problems. >> Except for this, I don\'t have any problem. 

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