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2015-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What helps you stay positive when you feel lost and alone? When I feel lost and alone, I think positive thought. I think that this is something for future. And I do mind control objectly.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! It\'s important to stay positive all the time. Don\'t get too stressed with things that bother you. Just think positive and be happy! T. JanE ^^ What helps you stay positive when you feel lost and alone?>> CorrectWhen I feel lost and alone, I think positive thought.>> When I feel lost and alone, I try to think positive. I think that this is something for future.>> I think about my future. And I do mind control objectly. >> I try to control my mind.

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