homework:^)
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I prefer to take live life at a slower pace.
when I asked my parents and friends about me they said you are such a easygoing person. I also know it because I'm doing anything well with an easy and composed attitude. If I hurry to do something I often miss that by the way, my parents always point out this since they are in a hurry to go any place and get things done.
But as many already know that, Most koreans tend to be in a hurry for whatever they do. On the other hand, I usually heard that other countries people look carefree. when I visited philippines I could found it easily. While I was standing in a line at the supermarket I was hard to wait my turn but other people really looked relaxed. That time I felt I'm real korean and learned different character of culture. I believe it will depend on each country's culture.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Fantastic work on your composition. Yes, you being easygoing is my first impression of you and that\'s why we became fast friends. ^^ You noticed that attitude in the Philippines, huh? ㅎㅎㅎ I think the motto of the Philippines is \"Just relax\" and \"Don\'t worry be happy\". ㅋㅋㅋ
Anyway, about your essay, your opinion was expressed clearly enough however corrections were made to be more articulate and rhetoric. ^^
Good job all in all.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I think I prefer to take live life at a slower pace.
>> I think I prefer to live life at a slower pace.
when I asked my parents and friends about me they said you are such a easygoing person. I also know it because I\'m doing anything well with an easy and composed attitude.
>> When I asked my parents and friends what they think about me, they said that I am such an easygoing person. I also am aware of that since I do things at an easy and composed attitude.
If I hurry to do something I often miss that by the way, my parents always point out this since they are in a hurry to go any place and get things done.
>> If I hasten in doing something, I often miss out on things. My parents always point this out since they are always in a hurry to go somewhere or to get things done.
But as many already know that, Most koreans tend to be in a hurry for whatever they do.
>> However, as most people already know, most Koreans tend to be impatient in whatever they do.
On the other hand, I usually heard that other countries people look carefree. when I visited philippines I could found it easily. While I was standing in a line at the supermarket I was hard to wait my turn but other people really looked relaxed.
>> On the other hand, I\'ve often heard that people from other countries are carefree and true enough, that was so when I visited the Philippines. While I was standing in line at a supermarket, it was hard to wait for my turn but the others around me looked really relaxed.
That time I felt I\'m real korean and learned different character of culture. I believe it will depend on each country\'s culture.
>> At that time, I felt like I was a real Korean and realized the differences in character of others cultures. I believe that a lifestyle\'s pace depends on a country\'s culture.
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