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2015-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Good morning!! It is wonderful Wednesday.^^ The weather is so nice today. It makes me feel refreshed.^^ How about you? I noticed that we have somethings in common..^^ I also like the rain when I am in the house.. I don't like to go out when it is rainning..it is also hard to drive..^^ I guese mosy of women are kinda moody..so do I..hehe It is not good. Right? but weathers really affect my mood and some other things too.. like wearing socks, matching shoes with clothes and so on... But I always try to transfer my bad mood to the others...however it is really hard.^^; Always thanks for the nice and great classes..Teacher!!!*^^* See you soon~~~ 1. The sunshine made me think of our trip to Mexico. 2. I had my hair trimmed last night. 3. I'm going to have him to pick me up after the concert. 4. He is going to have fixed his car next week. 5. Susan had the windows be cleaned.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday, Miss [이름]!

I agree, it\'s really hard to dress up when the weather is bad. ^^ I think all women are really moody.^^ Let\'s hope that when it rains in the coming months it wouldn\'t be too strong.^^

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne


Good morning!! It is wonderful Wednesday.^^

>> Correct!
The weather is so nice today. It makes me feel refreshed.^^ How about you?

>> Correct!
I noticed that we have somethings in common..^^

>> Correct!
I also like the rain when I am in the house..

>> Correct!
I don\'t like to go out when it is rainning..it is also hard to drive..^^

>> I don\'t like to go out when it\'s raining. It\'s also hard to drive.
I guese mosy of women are kinda moody..so do I..hehe

>> I guess, most women are kind of moody. So am I. Hehe.
It is not good. Right?

>> Correct!

but weathers really affect my mood and some other things too..

>> But the weather really affects my mood and some other things too,
like wearing socks, matching shoes with clothes and so on...

>> Correct!
But I always try to transfer my bad mood to the others...however it is really hard.^^;

>> But I always try to vent out my bad mood towards other things. However, it is really hard.
Always thanks for the nice and great classes..Teacher!!!*^^*

>> Correct!
See you soon~~~
>> Correct!
1. The sunshine made me think of our trip to Mexico.

>> Correct!
2. I had my hair trimmed last night.

>> Correct!
3. I\'m going to have him to pick me up after the concert.

>> Correct!
4. He is going to have fixed his car next week.

>> He is going to have his car fixed next week.
5. Susan had the windows be cleaned.

>> Susan had the windows cleaned.

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