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I know that racial discrimination is not ethical action.
>>I know that racial discrimination is not an ethical action.
>>I know that racial discrimination is not an unethical.
But this problem spread out all around the world.
>>But this problem spreads all around the world.
In my case, I like japanese but I don\'t like chinese because there are so many rumor about chinese.
>>In my case, I like Japanese but I don\'t like Chinese because there are so many rumors about them.
Many people said that chinese kill the people than they just keep the expensive internal organs.
>> Many people said that they kill the people then they just keep the expensive internal organs.
We all know that racial discrimination should be disappeared but a biased view is difficult to change.
>>We all know that racial discrimination should disappear but a biased view is difficult to change.
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