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2015-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition writing: What is your dream house? I live in the country. children likes running outside. my house isn`t inter-floor noise but there are a lot of insects. children likes insects but I hate it... sometimes I want to live in an apartment, but Now we live the house is dream house...

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ma\'am [이름]! Happy Thursday. I know that you like this day because it is close to the weekend. So enjoy your Thursday! Anyway, thank you for sharing your ideas baout dream house. You are lucky because you are living in your dream house. It must be beautiful and comfortable living there.^^ ~Kelly^^ Composition writing: What is your dream house?I live in the country. >> Correct.children likes running outside. >> Children like running outside.my house isn`t inter-floor noise >> My house doesn\'t have interfloor noise reduction panel.but there are a lot of insects. >> Correct. >> or: But there are a lot of insects. children likes insects but I hate it... >> Children like insects but I hate them.sometimes I want to live in an apartment, but Now we live the house is dream house... >> Sometimes I want to live in an apartment, but now we live in a house which is my dream house...

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