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2015-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. The weather is really nice today. I like fall. ^^ Facebook might finally give users the ability to "dislike" things. ~~~~ What do you think about this news? This news is very interesting, and their idea is very creative. However, I can't help thinking Facebook's new idea would make negative effects. It is well known that many people have been hurt due to negative empathy towards them. Mark Zuckerberg emphasized that their new idea would be invented to show empathy about natural disasters or loved ones dying. However, I am concerned with irresponsible users' use of that button which never intended by the inventors. Therefore, I really disagree with the dislike button in Facebook.

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Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I respect your opinion. It\'s actually spot on. The word \'dislike\' might have different connotations, depending on the user. Enjoy your weekend! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! The weather is really nice today. >> CORRECT! I like fall. ^^ >> CORRECT! OR >> I like the fall season.This news is very interesting, and their idea is very creative. >> CORRECT! However, I can\'t help thinking Facebook\'s new idea would make negative effects. >> CORRECT! >> cause It is well known that many people have been hurt due to negative empathy towards them. >> It is not a secret that many people have been hurt due to negative comments towards them. Mark Zuckerberg emphasized that their new idea would be invented to show empathy about natural disasters or loved ones dying. >> CORRECT! However, I am concerned with irresponsible users\' use of that button which never was intended by the inventors. >> CORRECT! Therefore, I really disagree with the dislike button in Facebook. >> CORRECT!

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