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2015-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. It's nice and cool today. My husband any son went to our weekend farm. I couldn't go there because of my reading assignment. But, I'm alright. I'm going to be able to have some quality time with my family because next week is Chuseok, Korean Thanksgiving Day. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms about music: 1. Go for a song 2. Call the tune 3. Sing a different tune 1. I'd like to buy a secondhand car. I could go for a song if there is someone who has to sell a car urgently. 2. Who is responsible for this project? Kaylee is the person who calls the tune in this project. 3. The Delegates from each country sing a different tune about universal human rights. This is the result of their different cultural backgrounds.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear Kaylee! Thanks for submitting your homework. Too bad you couldn\'t come with your family to the farm this weekend. Oh well. At least you have the Chuseok holiday to look forward to. You did really well here, by the way. Your example sentences were spot on! Great job!

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
 It\'s nice and cool today.

>> CORRECT! 
 My husband any son went to our weekend farm.

>> My husband and y son went to our weekend farm.
 I couldn\'t go there because of my reading assignment.

>> CORRECT! 
 But, I\'m alright.

>> CORRECT! 
 I\'m going to be able to have some quality time with my family because next week is Chuseok, the Korean Thanksgiving Day.
>> CORRECT! 
1. I\'d like to buy a secondhand car.

>> CORRECT!

I could go for a song if there is someone who has to sell a car urgently.

>> CORRECT! 
 2. Who is responsible for this project?

>> CORRECT!

Kaylee is the person who calls the tune in this project.

>> CORRECT! 

OR >> Kaylee calls the tune in this project. - better
 3. The Delegates from each country sing a different tune about universal human rights.

>> CORRECT!

This is the result of their different cultural backgrounds.

>> CORRECT!

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