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2015-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~there~ I am so sorry for doing homwork late.. Last Saturday, I got my students' parents in my class.. I needed to show my class to them and their chidren's ability of English.. So I was so busy to prepare for that..hehe I did it successfelly hehe I don't really believe superstition but it something happened bad, I thought about it..I guess we have some simillar superstitions.. like mirror broken then it would happen something bad, lucky 7 the number...and so on..hehe I am so careful about wearing socks inthe morning.. when I don't like the sock, the day will ne really bad..hehe That is my own superstition..^^ 1. Has he changed much over the years? 2. Is she Polish? 3. Does he like to drive at night? 4. Do you normally read before you go to bed? 5. DobI look tired?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Miss [이름]!

Your own superstition is interesting! ^^ Yes, i think we have a lot of similarities when it comes to superstitions, especially the number 7. ^^ Is it a lucky number for you?
I\'ll see you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

Hi~there~

>> Correct!
I am so sorry for doing homwork late..

>> I am so sorry for doing my homework late..
Last Saturday, I got my students\' parents in my class..

>> Last Saturday, I gathered my students\' parents in my class..
I needed to show my class to them and their chidren\'s ability of English..

>> I needed to show them the whole class and their children\'s English ability.
So I was so busy to prepare for that..hehe

>> So, I was so busy preparing for that..hehe
I did it successfelly hehe I don\'t really believe superstition but it something happened bad, I thought about it..

>> I did it successfully hehe. I don\'t really believe superstitions but if something bad happens, I think about it..

I guess we have some simillar superstitions..

>> I guess we have some similar superstitions.
like mirror broken then it would happen something bad, lucky 7 the number...

>> Like, if a mirror gets broken, then something bad will happen or that 7 is a lucky number

and so on..hehe I am so careful about wearing socks inthe morning..

>> and so on. Hehe. I am also careful in wearing socks in the morning.
when I don\'t like the sock, the day will ne really bad..hehe

>> When I don\'t like the socks, the day will be bad. Hehe.
That is my own superstition..^^

>> Correct!
1. Has he changed much over the years?
>> Correct!
2. Is she Polish?

>> Correct!
3. Does he like to drive at night?
>> Correct!
4. Do you normally read before you go to bed?

>> Correct!
5. DobI look tired?

>> Do I look tired? (typographical error ^^)

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