Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Miss [이름]!
Your own superstition is interesting! ^^ Yes, i think we have a lot of similarities when it comes to superstitions, especially the number 7. ^^ Is it a lucky number for you?
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Teacher Anne
Hi~there~
>> Correct!
I am so sorry for doing homwork late..
>> I am so sorry for doing my homework late..
Last Saturday, I got my students\' parents in my class..
>> Last Saturday, I gathered my students\' parents in my class..
I needed to show my class to them and their chidren\'s ability of English..
>> I needed to show them the whole class and their children\'s English ability.
So I was so busy to prepare for that..hehe
>> So, I was so busy preparing for that..hehe
I did it successfelly hehe I don\'t really believe superstition but it something happened bad, I thought about it..
>> I did it successfully hehe. I don\'t really believe superstitions but if something bad happens, I think about it..
I guess we have some simillar superstitions..
>> I guess we have some similar superstitions.
like mirror broken then it would happen something bad, lucky 7 the number...
>> Like, if a mirror gets broken, then something bad will happen or that 7 is a lucky number
and so on..hehe I am so careful about wearing socks inthe morning..
>> and so on. Hehe. I am also careful in wearing socks in the morning.
when I don\'t like the sock, the day will ne really bad..hehe
>> When I don\'t like the socks, the day will be bad. Hehe.
That is my own superstition..^^
>> Correct!
1. Has he changed much over the years?
>> Correct!
2. Is she Polish?
>> Correct!
3. Does he like to drive at night?
>> Correct!
4. Do you normally read before you go to bed?
>> Correct!
5. DobI look tired?
>> Do I look tired? (typographical error ^^)
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