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2015-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Thanks for praising my puppies.. For now, they are the members of mt family.. Some people can't understand me but it is true..^^ I am happy with them.. Have you watched the movie "Inside out"? I haven't..ㅜㅜ All my friends watched that and I didn't have a chance to watch it..poor me. I am planning that I will read or watch it... When I am angry, I try to s[이름]p.. I am very sensitive when I am upset..it is better not to talk with me... especially I am stressed out.. Luckly, I am not depressed and stressed out nowadays..so I rarely gets angry.hehehe What about you? Waht do you do when you are mad at something or somebody? 1. The river's current is very strong. It will be hard to get across. 2. You really need a car in this city to get around. 3. She had a hard time after the break-up, but then she decided to get in with her life. 4. My girlfriend's mother and I don't get along at all. a) b) get on c) get in 5. It's OK. Don't worry. You'll get through this.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.^^ You should see \'Inside Out\'. I cried a lot after watching it. ^^ When I am upset, I prefer to be left alone so that I can think why I got angry. I need to be left alone for about half a day. Hahah! And then, after that, I will talk to the person I had a misunderstanding with. ^^

Do have a great week! See you!

Teacher Anne

 

Thanks for praising my puppies..

>> Correct!
For now, they are the members of mt family..

>> For now, they are the members of my family.
Some people can\'t understand me but it is true..^^ I am happy with them..

>> Correct!
Have you watched the movie \"Inside out\"? I haven\'t..ㅜㅜ

>> Correct!
All my friends watched that and I didn\'t have a chance to watch it..poor me.

>> Correct!
I am planning that I will read or watch it...

>> I am planning to read or watch it.
When I am angry, I try to s[이름]p..

>> Correct!
I am very sensitive when I am upset..it is better not to talk with me...

>> Correct!
especially I am stressed out..

>>Correct!
Luckly, I am not depressed and stressed out nowadays..so

>> Luckily, I am not depressed and stressed out nowadays..so
I rarely gets angry.hehehe

>> I rarely get angry.Hehehe
What about you? Waht do you do when you are mad at something or somebody?
>> What about you? What do you do when you are mad at something or somebody?
1. The river\'s current is very strong. It will be hard to get across.

>> Correct!
2. You really need a car in this city to get around.

>> Correct!
3. She had a hard time after the break-up, but then she decided to get in with her life.
>> She had a hard time after the break-up, but then she decided to get on with her life.
4. My girlfriend\'s mother and I don\'t get along at all.
>> Correct!
5. It\'s OK. Don\'t worry. You\'ll get through this.

>> Correct!

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