Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.^^ You should see \'Inside Out\'. I cried a lot after watching it. ^^ When I am upset, I prefer to be left alone so that I can think why I got angry. I need to be left alone for about half a day. Hahah! And then, after that, I will talk to the person I had a misunderstanding with. ^^
Do have a great week! See you!
Teacher Anne
Thanks for praising my puppies..
>> Correct!
For now, they are the members of mt family..
>> For now, they are the members of my family.
Some people can\'t understand me but it is true..^^ I am happy with them..
>> Correct!
Have you watched the movie \"Inside out\"? I haven\'t..ㅜㅜ
>> Correct!
All my friends watched that and I didn\'t have a chance to watch it..poor me.
>> Correct!
I am planning that I will read or watch it...
>> I am planning to read or watch it.
When I am angry, I try to s[이름]p..
>> Correct!
I am very sensitive when I am upset..it is better not to talk with me...
>> Correct!
especially I am stressed out..
>>Correct!
Luckly, I am not depressed and stressed out nowadays..so
>> Luckily, I am not depressed and stressed out nowadays..so
I rarely gets angry.hehehe
>> I rarely get angry.Hehehe
What about you? Waht do you do when you are mad at something or somebody?
>> What about you? What do you do when you are mad at something or somebody?
1. The river\'s current is very strong. It will be hard to get across.
>> Correct!
2. You really need a car in this city to get around.
>> Correct!
3. She had a hard time after the break-up, but then she decided to get in with her life.
>> She had a hard time after the break-up, but then she decided to get on with her life.
4. My girlfriend\'s mother and I don\'t get along at all.
>> Correct!
5. It\'s OK. Don\'t worry. You\'ll get through this.
>> Correct!
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