homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hello Jane!
happy monday!
have a nice today!
I have a weakness for memory.
I often forgot recent memory.
So my friends call me that my nickname is carp.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I wqonder what your nickname \"Carp\" means. Could you tell me about it in class?
T. JanE ^^
Hello Jane!>> Correct
Happy monday!>> Correct
Have a nice today!>> Have a nice day! I have a weakness for memory.>> I have a weak memory.
I often forgot recent memory.>> I often forget recent events.
So my friends call me that my nickname is carp. >> So my friends call me \"Carp\" for my nickname.
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