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학생이 쓴 원문
Definite vision is becoming a motive that realize our dream.
It's truth. I believe that.
Some people don't have dream. It's not bad but, not good.
I know someone who don't have dream or plan, they spend a time meaninglessly still they be an adult.
We can prepare about our dream from we are child.
And also we can save a time.
We should have a dream.
강사 첨삭
Hi my dear [이름], its always nice talking about our dreams.
Dreams to fulfill and achieve.:)
And whatever dreams you have, I hope you would attain all of those.
Anyway, Ill talk to you again tomorrow my dear..
T.Cam
Definite vision is becoming a motive that realize our dream.T.Cam
>>Definitely, having a vision in life will motivate us to achieve our dreams.
It's truth. I believe that.
It's truth. I believe that.
>>Its true, I believe that!
>>Its the truth, I believe that!
Some people don't have dream.
Some people don't have dream.
>>Some people dont have a dream.
It's not bad but, not good.
>>correct!
I know someone who don't have dream or plan, they spend a time meaninglessly still they be an adult.
>>I knw someone who doesnt have a dream, and this person spent time meaningless until he became an adult.
We can prepare about our dream from we are child.
We can prepare about our dream from we are child.
>>We can prepare for our dreams from our childhood years.
And also we can save a time.
And also we can save a time.
>>We can also save time.
We should have a dream.
We should have a dream.
>>correct!
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