homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher, it wasn't a piece of cake kk
I totally agree that most experiences in our lives become valuable lessons for the future.
we all don't know value of doing something at that time. So we used to overlook that moment but we realize it later. For example what I have in mind of life that I lived with my grandparents while I was in university was really boring and uncomfortable since that time was hard for me to understand with each other. Because of this I often had problem with them like communication. Everything they said was like nagging to me. However as time passes by, I could understand their thought and regret that moment in trouble.
Trough having that experience, I became a person who can care elderly well. I also didn't know it at that time. Therefore, even this moment might be good lesson in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
You answered the composition very well that I would think it was a cinch for you. ^^
Most of the corrections were done to revise the tense of the verbs and to make it more coherent.
Good job all in all. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I totally agree that most experiences in our lives become valuable lessons for the future.
>> CORRECT
we all don\'t know value of doing something at that time. So we used to overlook that moment but we realize it later.
>> Most of us aren\'t aware of the value of doing something at that time being so we overlook the moment but then, we realize the value later on.
For example what I have in mind of life that I lived with my grandparents while I was in university was really boring and uncomfortable since that time was hard for me to understand with each other. Because of this I often had problem with them like communication.
>> For example, when I was in university, I felt really bored and uncomfortable living with my grandparents since at that time, we had difficulty in understanding each other, more often with communication.
Everything they said was like nagging to me.
>> It felt like they were nagging me everytime they told me something.
However as time passes by, I could understand their thought and regret that moment in trouble.
>> However, as time passed, I understood their thoughts and regretted those troubled moments.
Trough having that experience, I became a person who can care elderly well. I also didn\'t know it at that time. Therefore, even this moment might be good lesson in the future.
>> Through that experience, I became a person who could care for the elderly well even though, I didn\'t know it at that time. Therefore, even this moment might be a good lesson in the future.
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