Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative Writing
There is a saying "To have a good friend, you need to be a good friend."
How can you be a good friend?
I think good friend is always stay with his or her. Good friend need to talk the fact to her friend, so that her friend don't go wrong way. And good friend need to share her feeling with her friend. I think these things are important things to be a good frined.
강사 첨삭
Hey there [이름]!^.^
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework. I really appreciate that [이름]. You did a good job just be careful with your spelling (ex. frined ~ friend) and the usage of your pronouns. Keep on practicing by making up your own sentences as well as enrich your vocabulary by reading English essays or narratives. You\'ll be better than this in no time. Remember, effort never betrays:)
~Teacher Mayleen
I think good friend is always stay with his or her.
>> I think a good friend always stay by his or her friend\'s side.
Good friend need to talk the fact to her friend, so that her friend don\'t go wrong way.
>> A good friend needs to be honest so that her friend will not go astray.
And good friend need to share her feeling with her friend.
>> A good friend shares her feeling with her friend.
I think these things are important things to be a good frined.
>> I think these things are important in order to be a good friend.
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework. I really appreciate that [이름]. You did a good job just be careful with your spelling (ex. frined ~ friend) and the usage of your pronouns. Keep on practicing by making up your own sentences as well as enrich your vocabulary by reading English essays or narratives. You\'ll be better than this in no time. Remember, effort never betrays:)
~Teacher Mayleen
I think good friend is always stay with his or her.
>> I think a good friend always stay by his or her friend\'s side.
Good friend need to talk the fact to her friend, so that her friend don\'t go wrong way.
>> A good friend needs to be honest so that her friend will not go astray.
And good friend need to share her feeling with her friend.
>> A good friend shares her feeling with her friend.
I think these things are important things to be a good frined.
>> I think these things are important in order to be a good friend.
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