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I think that modern technolgy make life more convinient.
Smartphone is the best example of that. We can do anything on our own way. Now, I can't imagine the world without smartphone. Technology is developed more and more everyday. It means our life will become more convinient.
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Hello there Adam!
Thanks to technology, some impossible things are made possible.
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I think that modern technolgy make life more convinient.
>>I think that modern technology make life more convenient.
Smartphone is the best example of that.
>>CORRECT!
We can do anything on our own way.
>>CORRECT!
Now, I can\'t imagine the world without smartphone.
>>CORRECT!
Technology is developed more and more everyday.
>>Technology develops more and more.
It means our life will become more convinient.
>>It means our life will become more convenient.
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