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2015-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~~^^ It is the second day from Monday!! Let's stand for 3 more days..^^ We will have long holidays..*^^ It was an interesting question..If there is a time machine, what period should I go? For me.. I just want to be for now for good. I don't like to be a student again.. because we have to study and there is no freedom..and also we don't have enough money..In 20's...we should fight with our job..Our future was so hazy.. But in 30's..I have a good job, enough money..and also...freedom...I mean befor getting married...hehe Anyway, I am so happy with what I am doing and where I am... See ya~~^^ 1. The movie was really interesting! 2. I thought it was a good lecture, but I wasn't very interestedin the topic. 3. Our town is so boring! There is nothing to do here. 4. Are you bored with that game already? 5. Have you heard her laugh? It's so annoying.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss [이름]!

A happy day, indeed! I agree, being a student again sounds so depressing. Haha! I didn\'t like Math back then, and I\'m happy because it\'s all over now.

I\'m just glad that you maintain a happy attitude toward life. You truly make others happy! ^^

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

Hi~~^^ It is the second day from Monday!!

>> Correct!
Let\'s stand for 3 more days..^^ We will have long holidays..*^^
>> Let\'s endure for 3 more days..^^ We will have long holidays.. *^^
It was an interesting question..

>> Correct!

If there is a time machine, what period should I go?

>> Correct!
For me.. I just want to be for now for good.

>> For me, I just want to be in the present for good.

 I don\'t like to be a student again..

>> I don\'t want to be a student again.

because we have to study and there is no freedom..and also we don\'t have enough money..

>> Because we have to study and there is no freedom..and also we don\'t have enough money

In 20\'s...we should fight with our job..Our future was so hazy..

>> In my 20\'s we have to fight for our job. Our future was so hazy.
But in 30\'s..I have a good job, enough money..and also...freedom...I mean befor getting married...hehe

>> But in my 30\'s I have a good job, enough money and also freedom. I mean, before getting married. Hehe

 Anyway, I am so happy with what I am doing and where I am...
>> Correct!
See ya~~^^

>> Correct!
1. The movie was really interesting!
>>Correct!
2. I thought it was a good lecture, but I wasn\'t very interested in the topic.

>> Correct!
3. Our town is so boring! There is nothing to do here.

>> Correct!
4. Are you bored with that game already?

>> Correct!
5. Have you heard her laugh? It\'s so annoying.

>> Correct!

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