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2015-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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1. Earthquakes cause a great deal with damage of life and property. 2. Earthquakes occur when plates in the crust of the earth move. 3. When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup on pressure. 4. Natural disasters are caused in nature. 5. Flood warnings will not prevent the floods in occurring

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Hello [이름]!!! I know God is always at our side. Thank you!!! I am looking for to talk with you. I do hope that we can both do other best in improving your skills in English.Determination and perseverance move the world;thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In spite of difficulties, it could help you know your strength and weaknesses.  T. Jeny   1. Earthquakes cause a great deal with damage of life and property.>>Earthquakes cause a great deal of damage to life and property.2. Earthquakes occur when plates in the crust of the earth move.>>correct3. When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup on pressure.>>When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup of pressure.4. Natural disasters are caused in nature.>>Natural disasters are caused by nature.5. Flood warnings will not prevent the floods in occurring >>Flood warnings will not prevent the floods from occurring.

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