homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was students, I didn't want to study.
I know that studying is important.But whenever people said that you must study hard and go to high level University, my brain was known but I didn't study well and I wanted to play my friends at that time. Now I know why studying is important.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! It may be a bit late for you to realize that studying is important, but it\'s never too late for you to learn more, so keep studying! You can do it!
T. JanE ^^
When I was students, I didn\'t want to study.>> When I was a student, I didn\'t want to study.
I know that studying is important.
>> Correct
But whenever people said that you must study hard and go to high level University, my brain was known but I didn\'t study well and I wanted to play my friends at that time.
>> Many people told me that I must study hard so I could enter a good university, but I didn\'t because I wanted to play with my friends at that time.
Now I know why studying is important.
>> Correct
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