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2015-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

If they are close friend, people usually give electric appliances like tv or airconditioner. And when they visit a newly married couple's home, they give household goods like detergent or soap, a toilet roll. If they are not close friend, thry just prepare money. The amount is about from 50dollars to 100dollars.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for this Adam!

I am expecting you on my wedding day!

Thirty years later, be ready, ha! ha!

If they are close friend, people usually give electric appliances like tv or airconditioner.

>>If they are close friends, people usually give electric appliances like TV or air conditioner.

And when they visit a newly married couple\'s home, they give household goods like detergent or soap, a toilet roll.

>>And when they visit a newly married couple\'s home, they give household goods like detergent or soap and a toilet roll.
If they are not close friend, thry just prepare money.

>>If they are not a close friend, we just prepare money.

The amount is about from 50dollars to 100dollars.

>>The amount is about 50 to 100 dollars

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