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2015-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello~~Wow! It is already Wednesday~~ It is not really sunny in Korea..I hope that I will be better in the weather. Nowadays most people in the world care about their health..So do I. As you sail herbal medicine is better than the medicine from drugstores.. because they just use the ingredients from their own nature. But according the other doctors, it is better to have food by itself.. like real fresh ones...it is hard...right? I really try to eat various nutritions that need for a day.. I am also caring about my health as I am getting oldder..hehe What about you? 1. That's the man who stole my purse! 2. That's the jacket which I want to buy. 3. That's the girl who won the race. 4. The students who do well on the exam will be allowed to leave early. 5. We saw the cat which lives in the house next door.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss [이름]!

Vegetables are hard to eat, but they say we need it. So. I am also trying my best.. Haha. There is a vegetable here that tastes so

bitter. I don\'t like how it tastes, but they say it\'s good for the blood. Sometimes I try my best to eat it, but if there are other

vegetables on the table, I won\'t dare try it. ^^

See you later!

Teacher Anne

 

Hello~~Wow! It is already Wednesday~~

>> Correct!
It is not really sunny in Korea..

>> Correct!

I hope that I will be better in the weather.
>> I hope that the weather will get better.

>> I hope that I will feel better even with this kind of weather.
Nowadays most people in the world care about their health..So do I.

>> Correct!

>> Noways, many people in the world care about their health. So do I.
As you sail herbal medicine is better than the medicine from drugstores..

>> As you have said, herbal medicine is better than the medicine from drugstores,
because they just use the ingredients from their own nature.

>> because they use natural ingredients.
But according the other doctors, it is better to have food by itself..

>> But according to other doctors, it is better to eat the food just as it is,
like real fresh ones...it is hard...right?

>> Correct!
I really try to eat various nutritions that need for a day..

>> I really try to eat various nutritious food that I need for a day.

>> I really try to eat a variety of food that has different nutrients that I need for a day.
I am also caring about my health as I am getting oldder..hehe

>> I am also caring for my health as I am getting older. Hehe. 
What about you?

>> Correct!
1. That\'s the man who stole my purse!

>> Correct!
2. That\'s the jacket which I want to buy.

>> Correct!
3. That\'s the girl who won the race.

>> Correct!
4. The students who do well on the exam will be allowed to leave early.

>> Correct!
5. We saw the cat which lives in the house next door.

>> Correct!




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