Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!
Vegetables are hard to eat, but they say we need it. So. I am also trying my best.. Haha. There is a vegetable here that tastes so
bitter. I don\'t like how it tastes, but they say it\'s good for the blood. Sometimes I try my best to eat it, but if there are other
vegetables on the table, I won\'t dare try it. ^^
See you later!
Teacher Anne
Hello~~Wow! It is already Wednesday~~
>> Correct!
It is not really sunny in Korea..
>> Correct!
I hope that I will be better in the weather.
>> I hope that the weather will get better.
>> I hope that I will feel better even with this kind of weather.
Nowadays most people in the world care about their health..So do I.
>> Correct!
>> Noways, many people in the world care about their health. So do I.
As you sail herbal medicine is better than the medicine from drugstores..
>> As you have said, herbal medicine is better than the medicine from drugstores,
because they just use the ingredients from their own nature.
>> because they use natural ingredients.
But according the other doctors, it is better to have food by itself..
>> But according to other doctors, it is better to eat the food just as it is,
like real fresh ones...it is hard...right?
>> Correct!
I really try to eat various nutritions that need for a day..
>> I really try to eat various nutritious food that I need for a day.
>> I really try to eat a variety of food that has different nutrients that I need for a day.
I am also caring about my health as I am getting oldder..hehe
>> I am also caring for my health as I am getting older. Hehe.
What about you?
>> Correct!
1. That\'s the man who stole my purse!
>> Correct!
2. That\'s the jacket which I want to buy.
>> Correct!
3. That\'s the girl who won the race.
>> Correct!
4. The students who do well on the exam will be allowed to leave early.
>> Correct!
5. We saw the cat which lives in the house next door.
>> Correct!
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