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I agree more that going to classes should be optional for students.
We can see students to be absent easily whenever they do that, most professors were displeased. Sometimes some professors often told us that they can find how students are eager but university students are already adult and they can make a decision what they want. even if they misjudge something to do, they will take on their own shoulders. Of course, taking all class might be good for them however it couldn't be necessary required as allowing freedom in university.
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Hello there [이름]! ^^
Wonderful job on telling me what you think about the composition topic.~~
You have expressed your opinion clearly and most of the words are used correctly so there are no major corrections to be pointed out. (Totally awesome! ~~~) So it was just a matter of rephrasing (cleaning up the grammar) and using more fitting words (e.g. \"misjudge\" is correct but \"miscalculate\" is better)
See you in class!
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I agree more that going to classes should be optional for students.>> I agree more on classes being optional for students.
We can see students to be absent easily whenever they do that, most professors were displeased.
>> We see students easily playing hooky or skipping class and whenever they do, most professors are displeased.
Sometimes some professors often told us that they can find how students are eager but university students are already adult and they can make a decision what they want. even if they misjudge something to do, they will take on their own shoulders.
>> At times, some professors tell us that they see how eager students are but university students are already adults and they can make their own decisions wherein even if they miscalculate something, it will be on their shoulders.
Of course, taking all class might be good for them however it couldn\'t be necessary required as allowing freedom in university.
>> Of course, taking all classes might be good for students but it shouldn\'t be required to allow freedom in the university.
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