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2015-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello~ I'm writting early today.hahaha Have a nice day! Nothing is tougher than person. When I worked the part time job, a client likes me. But I really hate him because he is old and crazy. Then I stressed very much and so I am leaving that shock. I was very unfortunate. Whenever I look simular people like his face, I am very scared. But I am making an effort to remove shock.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! You really answered the homework early. You must be having some free time today. Take care and talk to you later!T. JanE ^^ Hello~>> Correct I\'m writting early today.hahaha>> Correct Have a nice day!>> Correct Nothing is tougher than person.>> Nothing is tougher than a person.  When I worked the part time job, a client likes me.>> WhenI had a part time job, a c[이름]e tliked me.  But I really hate him because he is old and crazy.>> Correct Then I stressed very much and so I am leaving that shock.>> I was so stressed that I wanted to get away from it.  I was very unfortunate.>> Correct Whenever I look simular people like his face, I am very scared. >> Whenever I see someone who looks like him, I feel very scared.  But I am making an effort to remove shock. >> But I am making an effort to overcome it.   

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