Homework

Good evening, teacher. I have a plan with my academic advisor and some friends this evening. We are gathering to celebrate my first publication for an academic journal. I would've liked to buy a meal for my academic advisor because he had helped me to improve my paper with patience. I should thank him so much for his support. I will tell you about this evening tomorrow. 1. Some people anticipate that computopia, which means an ideal society that people are liberated from labour through widespread use of computers, would come in the near future. However, other people say that many people would lose their bread and butter because human labor can be substituted with computers. 2. Since I got married, my husband and I brought home the bacon for ten years. Now, my husband has bring home the bacon because I have studied politics in graduate school three years ago. 3. It is commonly said that buttering a boss up is needed in one's social life.

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m looking forward to hearing your story later in our class. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good evening, teacher. >> CORRECT! I have a plan with my academic advisor and some friends this evening. >> CORRECT! We are gathering to celebrate my first publication for an academic journal. >> CORRECT! I would\'ve liked to buy a meal for my academic advisor because he had helped me to improve my paper with patience. >> I would like to buy a meal for my academic advisor because he had patiently helped me improve my paper. I should thank him so much for his support. >> CORRECT! I will tell you about this evening tomorrow. >> CORRECT! 1. Some people anticipate that computopia, which means an ideal society that people are liberated from labour through widespread use of computers, would come in the near future. >> CORRECT! However, other people say that many people would lose their bread and butter because human labor can be substituted with computers. >> However, others say that many people would lose their bread and butter because human labor can be substituted with computers. 2. Since I got married, my husband and I have brought home the bacon for ten years. >> CORRECT! Now, my husband has bring home the bacon because I have studied politics in graduate school three years ago. >> Now, my husband is bringing home the bacon since I started studying politics in graduate school three years ago. 3. It is commonly said that buttering a boss up is needed in one\'s social life. >> It is common knowledge that buttering up a boss is needed in one\'s social life.