Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Please buy the beer and icecream.
2.Mom will go to mart.
3.Mom back to the home.But light is off.
4.surprise!!!happy birthday to you~~~
5.Mom will happy.
-THE END-
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^ :)
So, that is how you will surprise your mom, huh! ^^ hehe.
I know that your mom will be very happy and very excited if you would do that suprise thing
for her. ^^
Anyway, thank you for making your homework. I will see you in our class.
Have a great day ahead. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
1.Please buy the beer and icecream.
>> I will plead to my mom to buy some beer and icecream.2.Mom will go to mart.
>> My mom will to the mart.3.Mom back to the home.But light is off.
>> My mom will come back home but the lights will be off.4.surprise!!!happy birthday to you~~~
>> Then when my mom will enter the house, we all say, \"SURPRISE!\" and \"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!\"5.Mom will happy.>> My mom will be very happy.-THE END-
>> Correct
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