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2015-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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If I persuade someone, speaking and respecrful action is more important than listening. If person who want to persuadr someone speak logical word, the opposite people focus on their word and be persuaded. But when we just talk with anyone, listening is important because careful listening is respectful action for speaker.

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much for this Adam!

I highly appreciate your effort in writing this.

I love the words! Anyways, see you tomorrow!

If I persuade someone, speaking and respecrful action is more important than listening.

>>If I persuade someone, speaking and respectful action are more important than listening.

If person who want to persuadr someone speak logical word, the opposite people focus on their word and be persuaded.

>> If a person who wants to persuade someone uses logical words, the audience could be persuaded.

But when we just talk with anyone, listening is important because careful listening is respectful action for speaker.

>>But when we just talk with someone, listening is important because careful listening is a respectful action towards the speaker.

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