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When I was in hawaii, that was the happiest life. I went to beautiful places everyday. Some beautiful memories are saved in my mind. One of my dreams is live in hawaii after I quit my job. I love bright sunshine, warm weather, beautiful blue color of beach, and awesome sunset.
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Everyone has a happy memory to remember.
Thanks for sharing yours, Adam!
See you and happy Thanksgiving Day^^
When I was in hawaii, that was the happiest life.
>>When I was in Hawaii, that was the happiest time of my life.
I went to beautiful places everyday.
>>I went to beautiful places every day.
Some beautiful memories are saved in my mind.
>>CORRECT!
One of my dreams is live in hawaii after I quit my job.
>>One of my dreams is to live in hawaii after quitting my job.
I love bright sunshine, warm weather, beautiful blue color of beach, and awesome sunset.
>>I love the bright sunshine, warm weather, beautiful blue color of the beach, and its awesome sunset.
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