Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Say something about the greatest gift that you have ever received in a maximum of 5 sentences.
Last year, I prepared the big test in korea, the College Scholastic Ability Test. While 2 weeks before the d-day, I felt tired and nervous. But many people gave me some chocolate, tteok, yeot to support me. So that I felt better and I thought I received a lot of love from my family and neighbors. And thanks for their help, I am a university student now.
강사 첨삭
A heartfelt Evening to you, [이름]! I am so happy that you answered your homework.
It is even better that you expressed your thoughts about our topic and I appreciate it so much!
Your perseverance to learn the English language is very evident!
Please continue performing your best in class.
There might be mistakes in your sentences or pronunciation but it is all part of learning so never give up.
Do well and the fruits of your labor will soon be seen.
Teacher Carmen^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Say something about the greatest gift that you have ever received in a maximum of 5 sentences.Last year, I prepared the big test in korea, the College Scholastic Ability Test.
>> I prepared for a big test in Korea which is called as the College Scholastic Ability Test last year.
While 2 weeks before the d-day, I felt tired and nervous.
>> I felt tired and nervous 2 weeks before that day.
But many people gave me some chocolate, tteok, yeot to support me.
>> But despite that, many people gave me some chocolates, tteok and yeot to show their support.
So that I felt better and I thought I received a lot of love from my family and neighbors.
>> I received a lot of love from my family and neighbors and because of that I felt so much better.
And thanks for their help, I am a university student now.
>>Correct!
OR>> And with their help, I am now a university student.
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