Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Make a short and brief story of how you will spend Chuseok in a maximum of 5 sentences.
As the same way that I told you today, I will spend most of the time in my home. My family usually spend time our own family. And I have many things that need to do untill next Thursday, so I need to do them. I will study the TOEIC, this is the first time to study this to me. And I will write some reports, prepare the exams, and do the programming homework. And be happy during your holiday.^^
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you for answering your homework!
You are really diligent! Enjoy your holiday as well, home buddy!
See you next week! I will miss talking to you!! Study hard! :)
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Make a short and brief story of how you will spend Chuseok in a maximum of 5 sentences.
As the same way that I told you today, I will spend most of the time in my home.
>> I will spend most of the time in my home the same way I told you earlier today.
My family usually spend time our own family.
>> My family usually spends our time alone.
And I have many things that need to do untill next Thursday, so I need to do them.
>> And I have many things that I still need to do until next Thursday, so I need to accomplish them.
I will study the TOEIC, this is the first time to study this to me.
>> It is my first time to study TOEIC and I need to focus on it.
And I will write some reports, prepare the exams, and do the programming homework.
I will also write about some reports, prepare for the exams and do the programming homework.
And be happy during your holiday.^^
>> Correct!
OR>> And I wish that you will be happy during the holiday!
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