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2015-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I agree to that opinion.Because if the person would make a decision alone.Then he wouldn't be able to notify other consquences aside of what he had thought if he would make that decision.Also,there can be other opinions or voices that goes opposite on making the decision.But ignoring all those voices and making a decision on your own would be too risky.I heard a famous phrase before that no matter how good the option or decision is,one must have to goa against if.I'm with this opinion.

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Good day to you, [이름]!   Wonderful job! Although, try to mention the topic of the composition on the first sentece just to avoid confusion on the part of your readers. ~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I agree to that opinion.Because if the person would make a decision alone.Then he wouldn\'t be able to notify other consquences aside of what he had thought if he would make that decision. >> I agree that a person shouldn\'t make important decisions alone since if that person did, he wouldn\'t be aware of the consequences that he might have overlooked.   Also,there can be other opinions or voices that goes opposite on making the decision.But ignoring all those voices and making a decision on your own would be too risky. >> Also, there would be other opinions or voices that oppose the said decision and ignoring these advice might be too risky.   I heard a famous phrase before that no matter how good the option or decision is,one must have to goa against if.I\'m with this opinion. >> I I heard a famous quote that says no matter how good an option or decision is, one must go against it and I am with this opinion.

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