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2015-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I guess that the company should support on protecting the enviroment.Lately,there is a lot of concerns that this planet has gone passed the half line until the worst case.Also,our enviroment status clock had reached 9:37 P.M until 12:00 P.M(the extinction of the earth).So to stop the situation from reaching the worst level.Major enterprises here and in other countries are making enviroment-friendly policies in their work.For example.Emart,one of the most famous commercial markets in Korea.Are releasing package-minimizations policy my not using a lot of inks in their products packages and packing as much ordered products as they can in one bag.

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Hello [이름]! ^^   Good work in writing this essay. ^^ You have shared a lot of information and I thank you for that. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I guess that the company should support on protecting the enviroment. >> I guess companies should support protecting the environment.   Lately,there is a lot of concerns that this planet has gone passed the half line until the worst case. >> Lately, there has been a lot of concerns that this planet has passed the demarcation line of the worst case scenario.   Also,our enviroment status clock had reached 9:37 P.M until 12:00 P.M(the extinction of the earth).So to stop the situation from reaching the worst level. Major enterprises here and in other countries are making enviroment-friendly policies in their work. >> Also, the environmental status clock has reached 9:37 PM which is a few hours away from the extinction of earth set at 12:00MN. So to stop the situation excalating to the worst, major enterprises around the world should make environmental-friendly policies.   For example.Emart,one of the most famous commercial markets in Korea.Are releasing package-minimizations policy my not using a lot of inks in their products packages and packing as much ordered products as they can in one bag. >> For example, E-mart, one of the most famous commercial markets in Korea, have released a policy to minimize the use of ink in their products packaging and packing as much as possible in one bag.

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