Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~^^
Good to see you again..I totally forgot about the homework..hehe sorry..
I dont like to be changed but time goes by, I learned something from experiences..
Throgh this, I can be more mature and wise..This is a good point..But
because of this, I always calculate the benefits..I don't really work for my job..
I just think that...I need to work how much I get from..this is a bad point..
hehe
1. I am cold. ( = I feel cold)
2. I have a cold. ( = I am sick)
3. I'm a little hungry.
4. He has a lot of money.
5. These students are very smart.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!~
Your energy is really contagious, so even though you feel like this about your job, people will hardly notice. ^^ It happens to everyone, I guess. But what is important is that you do not give up, and bear the present situation. Aja!
See you!
Teacher Anne
Hi~^^Good to see you again..I totally forgot about the homework..hehe sorry..
>> Correct!
I dont like to be changed but time goes by, I learned something from experiences..
>> I don\'t want to be changed but as time goes by, I learned something from my experiences.Throgh this, I can be more mature and wise..This is a good point..
>> Through this, I can be more mature and wise. This is a good point.
But because of this, I always calculate the benefits..I don\'t really work for my job..
>> But because of this I always calculate the benefits. I don\'t really work for the sake of my job
>> I don\'t really work because I love my job.
I just think that...I need to work how much I get from..this is a bad point.. hehe
>> I just think that I need to work based on how much I can get. This is a bad point. Hehe.1. I am cold. ( = I feel cold)
>> Correct!2. I have a cold. ( = I am sick)
>> Correct!
3. I\'m a little hungry.
>> Correct!4. He has a lot of money.
>> Correct!5. These students are very smart.
>> Correct!
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