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2015-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~^^ Good to see you again..I totally forgot about the homework..hehe sorry.. I dont like to be changed but time goes by, I learned something from experiences.. Throgh this, I can be more mature and wise..This is a good point..But because of this, I always calculate the benefits..I don't really work for my job.. I just think that...I need to work how much I get from..this is a bad point.. hehe 1. I am cold. ( = I feel cold) 2. I have a cold. ( = I am sick) 3. I'm a little hungry. 4. He has a lot of money. 5. These students are very smart.

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Hello, Miss [이름]!~ Your energy is really contagious, so even though you feel like this about your job, people will hardly notice. ^^ It happens to everyone, I guess. But what is important is that you do not give up, and bear the present situation. Aja! See you! Teacher Anne   Hi~^^Good to see you again..I totally forgot about the homework..hehe sorry.. >> Correct! I dont like to be changed but time goes by, I learned something from experiences.. >> I don\'t want to be changed but as time goes by, I learned something from my experiences.Throgh this, I can be more mature and wise..This is a good point.. >> Through this, I can be more mature and wise. This is a good point. But because of this, I always calculate the benefits..I don\'t really work for my job.. >> But because of this I always calculate the benefits. I don\'t really work for the sake of my job  >> I don\'t really work because I love my job. I just think that...I need to work how much I get from..this is a bad point.. hehe >> I just think that I need to work based on how much I can get. This is a bad point. Hehe.1. I am cold. ( = I feel cold) >> Correct!2. I have a cold. ( = I am sick) >> Correct! 3. I\'m a little hungry. >> Correct!4. He has a lot of money. >> Correct!5. These students are very smart. >> Correct!

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