Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!
I think I\'m going to try to make a wish on the next full moon too. I hope it will come true. ^^ The next blood moon will be in 2033. Pretty far, if you ask me. I didn\'t get to see it too. Only those on the other part of the world got to see it. Still, I think the super moon is awesome. ^^
Teacher Anne
Hello!!again..^^
>> Hello again! ^^
I didn\'t know that I could see the blood moon..
>> Correct!
I just check the super moon to pray for my wishes..what a watse..
>> I just checked the super moon to pray for my wishes what a waste.
I don\'t rea;;y know about blood moon..hehe
>> I didn\'t really know about the blood moon.
I checked that one because of you..thanks for letting me know a new thing..
>> Correct!
1. Denver is located at the foot of Rocky Mountains.
>> Correct!
2. Toronto is located on Lake Ontario.
>> Correct!
3. San Diego is located near Mexican border.
>> Correct!
4. Let’s go to Mexico.
>> Correct!
5. Nile is the longest river in the world.
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