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2015-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good morning, teacher. It is raining now here in Seoul. I suddenly became gloomy and depressed. T.T I wanted to ask you about your trip this holiday. But, I didn't have enough time to do that. Please, tell me about it tomorrow. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms about food: 1. Freeze one's buns off 2. Full of beans 3. Gravy train 1. I have been to Moscow in Russia. Russians say that their winter is extremely cold, but in my opinion the winters in Seoul are more brutal than in Russia. The winters in Seoul makes me freeze my buns off. 2. As I told you before, my grandfather is still full of beans at eighty-eight. He is studying very hard because of a university entrance exam. I am very proud of him. 3. Investment in stocks was once considered as a gravy train. However, you will lose your money if you start to invest in stocks without any studying the stock market.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Cheer up! Just think about all the plants and flowers that will get watered because of the rain. ^^ I have a gazillion stories about my trip. I think 10 minutes is not enough! Haha! But I\'ll try my best to summarize it for you tomorrow. Thanks for doing your homework. Please check my corrections below.  Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT! It is raining now here in Seoul. >> CORRECT! I suddenly became gloomy and depressed. T.T >> CORRECT! I wanted to ask you about your trip this holiday. >> CORRECT! But, I didn\'t have enough time to do that. >> CORRECT! Please, tell me about it tomorrow. >> CORRECT! 1. I have been to Moscow in Russia. >> CORRECT! Russians say that their winter is extremely cold, but in my opinion the winters in Seoul are more brutal than in Russia. >> CORRECT! The winters in Seoul makes me freeze my buns off. >> CORRECT! OR >> The winters in Seoul freezes my buns off. 2. As I told you before, my grandfather is still full of beans at eighty-eight. >> CORRECT! He is studying very hard because of a university entrance exam. >> CORRECT! >> the I am very proud of him. >> CORRECT! 3. Investment in stocks was once considered as a gravy train. >> CORRECT! >> remove \'as\' However, you will lose your money if you start to invest in stocks without any studying the stock market. >> However, you will lose your money if you start to invest in stocks without studying the stock market first. 

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